I haven"t wrote these in long time...(student haste) Are this my fifth critique for you? I still repeat myself: I cant anything for it that I likes your great photos. Like your hairstyle, curly and long hair are beautiful! Finally I know, that you make your makeup with yourself. You made still good work! Dress is lovely, I would myself try dress like that. Shoes fit with dress perfectly. Background is nice, not too much a objects. What is that flying thing over there? (Sorry, english isn`t my mother language). Keep going, you`re the great and have a nice day!
I love steampunk/dieselpunk, so this really caught my eye. Not much needs to be said for the beauty of the model because Esmeralda is obviously staggeringly attractive.
The pose is indicative of the era, bringing to mind the poses of many a model on art deco advertisement posters. I like the care given to the design and details of the wardrobe. Not only professional, but perfectly tailored to the model's physique. The vintage jewelry and hair brooch adds the the authenticity of the piece, as does the makeup that reflects the style of the era.
I love the idea of the airship in the background, but I only wish that it could have been blended in a little better with the photo. As it is, it has an obvious look of a Photoshop add-in instead of fooling the eye into believing that it's actually there.
Overall this is a lovely piece centered around a striking model who knows how to work a photo.
Are this my fifth critique for you?
I still repeat myself: I cant anything for it that I likes your great photos. Like your hairstyle, curly and long hair are beautiful!
Finally I know, that you make your makeup with yourself. You made still good work!
Dress is lovely, I would myself try dress like that.
Shoes fit with dress perfectly. Background is nice, not too much a objects. What is that flying thing over there? (Sorry, english isn`t my mother language). Keep going, you`re the great and have a nice day!
The pose is indicative of the era, bringing to mind the poses of many a model on art deco advertisement posters. I like the care given to the design and details of the wardrobe. Not only professional, but perfectly tailored to the model's physique. The vintage jewelry and hair brooch adds the the authenticity of the piece, as does the makeup that reflects the style of the era.
I love the idea of the airship in the background, but I only wish that it could have been blended in a little better with the photo. As it is, it has an obvious look of a Photoshop add-in instead of fooling the eye into believing that it's actually there.
Overall this is a lovely piece centered around a striking model who knows how to work a photo.
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