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Gate to Wonderland by la-esmeralda Gate to Wonderland by la-esmeralda
Photographer: ~LuxProfundi

Model, H&M: me

Dress: Amarotis Latex Couture

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Critique by Lazarus Chernik, Creative Director for Echo-X:

First, I'm really tough on stars - so don't take those as bad. This was clearly a simple studio shot of a pretty girl in a latex dress. (Was the dress custom made?)

I see what you were trying to do here and it's not bad, but the next level requires more studio work.

You need at least two more light sources. The have a primary, but missing a fill and a back-light. In this case, the back-light should come from overhead. Because the overall tone of the piece is green with a gold dress, the fill should be gelled red-violet. Her gorgeous tresses should be over-flowing with texture from the interplay of lighting - instead it's a single shaggy shape.

A little could've been done in post to clean up the elbows, they have unattractive shadows (both of them).

I can't critique the pose and model, because I didn't see the reel. The hair and makeup did it's job for this lighting - maybe in better lighting they wouldn't show themselves as well.

Good luck!
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Jessica-Lorraine-Z Oct 18, 2012  Professional General Artist
WOW!
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looks amazing how did you get your hair like that ? :O
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Freddy1016 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that outfit looks really amazing on you!
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la-esmeralda Jul 26, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you! :)
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Freddy1016 Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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la-esmeralda Mar 5, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you! :)
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Jett5N Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
awesome beauty (model and photograph)
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Nytcrawler Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, gorgeous!
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la-esmeralda Jan 18, 2012  Professional Photographer
thank you! :hug:
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