Critique time! I really love this piece, so I don't really know how constructive I can be.
First, addressing you as the model, you are very talented. Your posture has a lot of kick to it and it really causes your sexiest assets to pop, if you know what I mean. It gives a very flattering silhouette, a lot of grace, and is more interesting than just a regular head-on pose.
Furthermore, the posture really creates the whole composition, creating a focal point that perfectly offsets the one in the background (the large doors).
The hair and make up are of course splendid, elaborate, and fit nicely with the gorgeous dress.
The use of bright red on a greyscale background really draws the eye, and it's why I must award you near PERFECT points for impact. The only place where it falters a bit is where you have the grey nylons. I think they fit the costume well, however, they blend in a bit. Perhaps a bit of off-setting tint in the background would have helped, like a bit of a steely blue filter over the background itself but not you.
The originality points are really just due that a woman in a red sexy red dress, and the use of bright red over something desaturated are both commonly employed techniques, but you still pull them off very nicely, adding a bit of flare. I think the most original part is how you did the make-up and the mask effect.
Ultimately, this creates a very clean, visually appealing image and you look quite fabulous. :3
First, addressing you as the model, you are very talented. Your posture has a lot of kick to it and it really causes your sexiest assets to pop, if you know what I mean. It gives a very flattering silhouette, a lot of grace, and is more interesting than just a regular head-on pose.
Furthermore, the posture really creates the whole composition, creating a focal point that perfectly offsets the one in the background (the large doors).
The hair and make up are of course splendid, elaborate, and fit nicely with the gorgeous dress.
The use of bright red on a greyscale background really draws the eye, and it's why I must award you near PERFECT points for impact. The only place where it falters a bit is where you have the grey nylons. I think they fit the costume well, however, they blend in a bit. Perhaps a bit of off-setting tint in the background would have helped, like a bit of a steely blue filter over the background itself but not you.
The originality points are really just due that a woman in a red sexy red dress, and the use of bright red over something desaturated are both commonly employed techniques, but you still pull them off very nicely, adding a bit of flare. I think the most original part is how you did the make-up and the mask effect.
Ultimately, this creates a very clean, visually appealing image and you look quite fabulous. :3
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